How would this sound in a note to a girl?

[Guest]

I typed (using the Google Translator) it in German because she is a foreign exchange student from Germany and I thought it might be more romantic that way:

"Hallo Katherina, schrieb ich dieses Schreiben in Deutsch, nur für Sie. Würde es Ihnen etwas ausmachen, wenn ich ging mit Ihnen Ihre nächste Klasse? Wir könnten sogar zu Fuß draußen auf den Bürgersteigen rund um die Schule und nehmen Sie an der frischen Luft und zu sehen, wenn Sie wollen."

Here is an English version of it:

"Hi Katherina, I wrote this letter in German, just for you. Would you mind if I walked with you to your next class? We could even walk outside on the sidewalks around the school and take in the fresh air and view if you want."

User was banned for this post; for inter-community spam

[[NE]Fobby[GEN]]

So why is it that you're posting on every C&C forum about this girl?

[Dehumanization]

You should go up to her sometime and whisper in her ear "Juden haben Waffen".

[MightyBOB]

Get out. Allow my banstick to show you to the door.